cavity inside me 2

hi
this one is i thinka better version of my previous post "cavity inside me" which my readers think is not up to the mark as it lacks flow.
thanks to all who helped me improve
here it goes

A cavity inside me developing
Getting thrust
By the pools of pain and disgust
Trying to wash it away with even more pain
As I think it’s not futile to get wet in the paining rains

I’m alone
I need someone
I need someone to drain my thoughts
One who is neutral and plain
To consume excess blue blood and memories that still remain

Aaaaah
As I see lightning
My blood begins to boil it begins to flow
It gives me force to face the viscous air and my skin light to glow
I feel my anger controls it and although it’s beautiful you see
It destroys anything I hate and hate around me

Sun kills my thoughts and dries my skin as skies begin to clear
Color which reminds me of blue blood comes and black beauty disappears
I hate it
And I hate me
As I have lost my friend again
The rain